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Safe Place


The night falls

The wind whispers

The ceremony is performed


Words are not enough

When the drink numbs the senses


Words are not enough

When the eyes say everything


I'm here

Fed by the demons from my past

I'm here

Bewitched by the promises of a collective unconscious


Hidden in a safe place

a safe place in my mind


Surviving the dark ideas from white people

In this intolerant universe



Being faithful to me

Cheating on you

It is the law of survival



The night falls

And amid whispers

Words are never enough


I'm here

Absorving every minute from moon

Awaking every piece from my body


Hidden in a safe place



a safe place in my mind.

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Being faithful to me

Cheating on you

It is the law of survival!

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~Elendurwen Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like to know more about the 'collective unconscious' you talk about please. Also, what did you mean by 'dark ideas from white people'?
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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Feb 20, 2013  Professional Writer
Unconscious Collective is a group of symbols and references that are common to all,as Christians symbols.

Normally this suggestion comes into our mind through dreams.

I'll explain better in another text...

Now

Dark ideas from white people

It's about people like Hitler...

Some white people believe to be superior to others because of their color skin.
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~Elendurwen Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah, so you believe that on some subconscious level, we are all mentally connected? Interesting..

Regarding the other point, some people believe they are superior because of their sexuality or because of their intelligence. Should we go around saying 'dark ideas from the heterosexuals'? Sorry, your statement where you put white people to one bag just surprised me as I didn't think you were a racist, but maybe I'm over thinking it and it just looked suitable to you for the poem.
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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Mar 15, 2013  Professional Writer
I was making a metaphor specifically about the Holocaust and Hitler...

I really think Hitler not acted with common sense...but it's only my opinion...and my opinion only belongs to me.

Even because,who I am,
and what people think I am
will always something relative and open to multiple interpretations.
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~Elendurwen Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, yes Hitler was nuts, I don't think anyone can argue with that :)
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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Feb 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you :heart:
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Mood: Love =EveFromLove Feb 16, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you so much!:kiss:
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